Sunday, September 11, 2016

In “The Poet”, Tom Wayman uses a informative, and annoyed tone by using an unorganized  form without periods and little punctuation to show the reader how complicated and confusing a poet's mind actually is. The author also uses a lot of negatives like “cannot” or “does not” to show that he is annoyed by a poet's complexities. The fact that the poem uses little punctuation shows how unorganized and confusing a poet is. The author says “cannot handle “yes-no” questions.” This quote is making a generalization and it does that a lot throughout a poem which also shows how it has an annoyed tone. Tom Wayman uses this tone and unorganized form to show the reader how unorganized and complex a poet's mind is.

1 comment:

  1. Sam great job on your first sentence. You managed to include all of the main points. However, I am a little unsure by your choice of tone. How can a tone be informative, but also annoyed? The author isn't the one getting annoyed, but rather the poet itself who the author is talking about, feels frustrated. Also, the format of the precis needs a little work. The ideas need a little more flow and analysis. How does the author writing "cannot" show how he is annoyed? How does this theme of negativity construct what a poet really is? Also, you mentioned in the beginning that you would be discussing the punctuation, but instead focused on the negative words. However, I could really see that you understood the main ideas of the poem. You picked up on the key ideas, just that a little more was needed. You still did a good job!

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